Hello! Just stumbled across this game and thought I'd share a few thoughts.
Was surprised by the voice-acted intro. Pleasantly of course.
I noticed some spelling/grammar mistakes but only a couple. For AVNs, I always recommend putting them through some sort of spell/grammar check for quality.
I enjoyed the animations as well. I'm not sure what magic you used, but I was able to play this on my low-specs laptop without lagging or crashing from them! Whatever it is, keep doing it lol.
Other than that, this seems like a really cool project! I guess my only fear or concern is the game becoming too femdom-centric? Respect to the fetish, but I'm much more interested in getting to know the characters and developing a relationship that way.
Thank you SOOOO MUCH for the feedback! It really means the world to me!
I'm very happy you like my narration ♥ You should try out my E.U.F.C. demo on here, it's primarily a narrated game! And yes, I'm super dyslexic so I spend a lot of time trying to catch errors but they sneak in despite my endeavours :D And I'm so glad you liked the animations! DAZ is NOT animator friendly... but trying to learn Blender almost caused my brain to explode so I gotta make the best of what I got :D
As for the femdom? There'll be a mix I think :) The MILF's of this town are VERY much ruling the roost and your character is entirely in over his head at the start :D But that's what character progression is for! Will you conquer this Cougar-infested Suburbia? Or will it conquer YOU?! :D
Hi sweetie! Well this is a game ALL about MILFS wanting to dominate and control the others :D Sexually, physically, emotionally... so there's going to be a LOT of FemDom! But at the moment it's just at Demo stage, this is a one woman project so there's a LONG way to go :D
Hey, Love the game. I saw it on The F95zone. Everything works well together. The art and the ladies' attitudes are great. It's like a 70s sitcom with sex. Haha. If you join F95, hit me up. I did a little work on the script.
Hey there! Thanks so much for the message! Although I'm not sure what F95zone is or why my demo is there! But I guess it's a compliment that someone thought my work was good enough to warrant pirating! LOL :D
I'm so happy you liked the Demo! I'm working on releasing another demo of a different project soon, one where I narrate all the action. Not a traditional Visual Novel as such but certainly not a million miles away :) More an audio erotica that you steer and navigate based on what you want to happen :)
As for F95, tell me more! What is it? And what do you mean work on the script? Like, edited the game?
Hey there. Thanks for getting back to me. I'm surprised you hadn't heard of F95. It is a pirate site but more of a community of AVN enthusiasts. It's a great place to get seen and promote your game. On the negative side, some members are ruthless in their comments about the games there. I recommend using the site if one of your goals is to make money from the game. It has an extensive database. It is set up for easy communication between members.
The other game sounds very interesting. I can see how it would be popular.
Regarding your game, I proofread it and think I can help. The dialogue is very good, but I see minor areas for improvement. I'm a native English speaker. I guess you could say editing, in a way. Not changing the intention of the dialogue.
I would recommend joining F95. Hope to talk soon. F95zone
This game is awesome. The quality of each aspect is brilliant: voices, models, art, backgrounds, expressions, sounds. Is your voice narrating the introduction? that voice is beautiful. Please, can you consider adding pubic hair to the characters? Thank you and best regards.
Thank you so much for commenting! And I'm so happy you liked it!
Yes it's me doing the narrations, they'll be popping up more and more in future chapters as your fully explore the world of BATTLE MILFS :D And I have a lot of characters planned, I'm sure I'll be able to give some of them pubic hair :D It's something I'll have to look into though as the last time I looked (admittedly this was a few years ago) the pubic hair assets were not that great. Still... the tech has come on a lot so I'm sure there's better stuff out there now :)
Thanks so much for taking the time to reply! Really appreciate it :)
The name thing is something I've been considering for a while :) will likely go in on a future version
As for the customisation, clothing wise it should be quite easy :) Although I've gone SUPER overboard on the number of poses and reactions each character has so to duplicate them with different outfits might cause a bit of a size issue on the game-file itself, but it's for sure something to consider! thanks sweetie! Gemma x
I just realised... I'm not sure if I'll be able to do the renaming character thing! You see... I'm going to be narrating portions of the game myself like I did with the intro and without being able to say character's names that's going to hamper what I can narrate quite drastically...
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Hello! Just stumbled across this game and thought I'd share a few thoughts.
Other than that, this seems like a really cool project! I guess my only fear or concern is the game becoming too femdom-centric? Respect to the fetish, but I'm much more interested in getting to know the characters and developing a relationship that way.
Thank you SOOOO MUCH for the feedback! It really means the world to me!
I'm very happy you like my narration ♥ You should try out my E.U.F.C. demo on here, it's primarily a narrated game! And yes, I'm super dyslexic so I spend a lot of time trying to catch errors but they sneak in despite my endeavours :D And I'm so glad you liked the animations! DAZ is NOT animator friendly... but trying to learn Blender almost caused my brain to explode so I gotta make the best of what I got :D
As for the femdom? There'll be a mix I think :) The MILF's of this town are VERY much ruling the roost and your character is entirely in over his head at the start :D But that's what character progression is for! Will you conquer this Cougar-infested Suburbia? Or will it conquer YOU?! :D
any femdom in this game and character name, please?
or dominating personality female character name
Hi sweetie! Well this is a game ALL about MILFS wanting to dominate and control the others :D Sexually, physically, emotionally... so there's going to be a LOT of FemDom! But at the moment it's just at Demo stage, this is a one woman project so there's a LONG way to go :D
But I hope you like what I've done so far!
Gemma xxx
ill surely check this
Hey, Love the game. I saw it on The F95zone. Everything works well together. The art and the ladies' attitudes are great. It's like a 70s sitcom with sex. Haha. If you join F95, hit me up. I did a little work on the script.
Hey there! Thanks so much for the message! Although I'm not sure what F95zone is or why my demo is there! But I guess it's a compliment that someone thought my work was good enough to warrant pirating! LOL :D
I'm so happy you liked the Demo! I'm working on releasing another demo of a different project soon, one where I narrate all the action. Not a traditional Visual Novel as such but certainly not a million miles away :) More an audio erotica that you steer and navigate based on what you want to happen :)
As for F95, tell me more! What is it? And what do you mean work on the script? Like, edited the game?
Hey there. Thanks for getting back to me. I'm surprised you hadn't heard of F95. It is a pirate site but more of a community of AVN enthusiasts. It's a great place to get seen and promote your game. On the negative side, some members are ruthless in their comments about the games there. I recommend using the site if one of your goals is to make money from the game. It has an extensive database. It is set up for easy communication between members.
The other game sounds very interesting. I can see how it would be popular.
Regarding your game, I proofread it and think I can help. The dialogue is very good, but I see minor areas for improvement. I'm a native English speaker. I guess you could say editing, in a way. Not changing the intention of the dialogue.
I would recommend joining F95. Hope to talk soon. F95zone
I downloaded the files but they still won't open
are you using a PC?
This game is awesome. The quality of each aspect is brilliant: voices, models, art, backgrounds, expressions, sounds. Is your voice narrating the introduction? that voice is beautiful. Please, can you consider adding pubic hair to the characters? Thank you and best regards.
Thank you so much for commenting! And I'm so happy you liked it!
Yes it's me doing the narrations, they'll be popping up more and more in future chapters as your fully explore the world of BATTLE MILFS :D
And I have a lot of characters planned, I'm sure I'll be able to give some of them pubic hair :D It's something I'll have to look into though as the last time I looked (admittedly this was a few years ago) the pubic hair assets were not that great. Still... the tech has come on a lot so I'm sure there's better stuff out there now :)
THANKS AGAIN SWEETIE!
Gemma x
Good demo , a bit short but the model ambiance makes up for it .
Few ideas , add renames plus maybe MC customisation .
GL man .
Thanks so much for taking the time to reply! Really appreciate it :)
The name thing is something I've been considering for a while :) will likely go in on a future version
As for the customisation, clothing wise it should be quite easy :) Although I've gone SUPER overboard on the number of poses and reactions each character has so to duplicate them with different outfits might cause a bit of a size issue on the game-file itself, but it's for sure something to consider!
thanks sweetie!
Gemma x
I just realised... I'm not sure if I'll be able to do the renaming character thing!
You see... I'm going to be narrating portions of the game myself like I did with the intro and without being able to say character's names that's going to hamper what I can narrate quite drastically...
You're right next update il try to review again 👍
ok i try
Don't be afraid to write me a comment! I'm very new to games design so any feedback, good or bad, is GREATLY appreciated! ♥